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The Sea (part One)

~~The Sea

Waves gently lapping against the shore
Dragging away the soft red sands
Warm, hazy sunshine breaking through crisp, white clouds
Seagulls calling, mocking with their laughter
Waves gently lapping against the shore
Powerful enough to drag you away
Far out to sea
Never to be seen again
Waves gently lapping against the shore

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The Sea (Part two) ►

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Jon

Sun 21st Sep 2014 21:43

Interesting use of repetition once again and I liked the mocking seagulls!!

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