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IS THERE ANYBODY OUT THERE

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Tap, tap, tap

Is there anybody there

Making movement

Making love cos its not fair

Making Gospel so the sheep can bleat

Whats the problem guys

Its only war

 

Its only fear

Its only death

It will pass

Not too slowly

Not too fast

 

There.s bucks to be made

So lets all hate

Lets all plunder

Great News friends

There is someone  there

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Its Called the Universe ►

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 14th Sep 2014 20:57

we enyoyed the poem Jean.The last line-
'there is someone there'

tis'nt Lord Lucan is it?

nice piece.xx

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Ged the Poet

Sun 14th Sep 2014 16:05

Very clever and inspired line here;
'Making Gospel so the sheep can bleat' and also the finish 'There is someone there'... Lord/Shepherd etc

Great to see you back Jean-Lucy.

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