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Poem: Unfinished Is...

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Unfinished is the fine tuning of me,
as I perform in this human drama,
which is covered by a spiritual mystery.

Participating without a script,
I'm stumbling forward in a lifelong excursion,
although I'm not fully equipped.

In this paradise, that's known as Earth,
I'm a curious child of wonderment
and working towards my supernatural rebirth.

Despite my growth of understanding,
I will always be an adolescent boy of His -
Forever dependent on God (while I'm here living).

Unfinished is the beauty of my tapestry
until I can achieve the final conclusion
that is... Permanently me.

 

 

Author Notes:

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By Joseph J. Breunig 3rd, © 2009, All rights reserved.

 

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<Deleted User> (12181)

Mon 28th Apr 2014 21:13

Joseph,
This is beautifully written and hits deep within the heart. A great reminder of the perspective we should have towards our faith and ultimate goal. Thanks for sharing.
-PS

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