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The wet touch

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Where butter melts

and honey drips

and parting comes

from parted lips;

with my fingers 

I smear the dew-

my enquiring tongue 

enquires of you;

your fragrance stole

from your folded clutch

yet offered warm

and wet to touch.

 

words and foto T Carroll

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<Deleted User> (11938)

Wed 19th Feb 2014 04:41

Hey there, wonderful piece of writing. You might want to check out www.highonpoems.com Keep writing!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 18th Feb 2014 15:26

A contemporary poem yet it immediately relates
to the famous Elizabethan style in its subject
and its expertly chosen language.
In that sense alone...timeless.

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Laura Taylor

Tue 18th Feb 2014 09:18

A beautiful delicate sensual poem, tinged with poignancy, perfectly balanced, in that way you write so well.

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