Secrets of the Willow
His first time,
stealthily,
takes her hand
leads her through
the petticoats
of a weeping willow.
Lost from view
he pulls her close
eager to discover
what lies beneath
the petticoats within
Comments
Thank you Cynthia. That's a good question. I think it's because "screened" never occurred to me, but I expect it would be more appropriate!
<Deleted User> (6895)
Thu 19th Dec 2013 17:44
is this what happens on the banks of the river when you moor up with Colin?,and...
did you get any pikkys? haha.xx
Nice one, Lynne. Why did you use 'lost' from view instead of 'screened' from view. Really curious.
Hi Solar, thank you for your comment :-)
Now that would appear to be the million dollar question - must admit, you have a great imagination, haha. Lxx
<Deleted User> (9882)
Wed 11th Dec 2013 22:00
Lynn,nice to see you blogging again,but! when do we get to know what-IS-'beneath the petticoats within'? is it a hot water bottle,or thermal bloomers? lol!x
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Lynn Dye
Thu 19th Dec 2013 19:47
Hi Stef & Patricia. Well, there may have been a time - but more years ago than I would care to remember! Haha. (And we didn't have a boat then...) Thanks for comment, hope you are both well.xx