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A Bigger Man Than Me

I always liked the jacket my Dad wore.

One day I found it

Hanging lonely and forlorn

In a wardrobe

And I thought of him and me

And remembered he was a bigger man than me

 

I tried the jacket on

And felt him close once again

I always liked the little pocket for a watch and chain

But to my dismay the jacket didn’t fit, not at all

It was too small

Though he was a bigger man than me

 

He went to work every day on his bike

A fitter man there never was

And every day of his life he spent outdoors

Lifting concrete blocks

Hammering tarmac

He was a bigger man than me

 

So I never got to wear the jacket

Except once when I was a lad

When the jacket was twice the size of me

So today it’s confirmed –I stand bigger than my Dad

Though in my heart

He will always be a bigger man than me.

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Ged Thompson

Wed 27th Nov 2013 02:34

I love this

No need to analyse it, it is, what it is, a piece of writing from the heart

Well done

Brilliant poem!!!!!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 26th Nov 2013 14:08

My own father died when I was five and I never
knew him - but I can understand the feelings
set out so strongly in this piece and I enjoyed
it for its own sake.

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Starfish

Tue 26th Nov 2013 10:34

Very poignant tribute to your father. Lovely.

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Dave Bradley

Tue 26th Nov 2013 08:43

I really like this Steve. It stands well in the blogs next to Shirley's poem. Two people writing about how much their dads meant to them - and writing very well.

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