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Loveontheline

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Standing on the platform in the pouring rain,

Waiting for the early morning train,

You are on my mind and in my heart,

The lights are on red while we are apart,

We have crashed off the tracks and derailed,

Shunted into a sidings as the points have failed,

Our carriage is empty - its sadness time,

We have gone and laid our loveontheline,

 

Let’s get our lives back on track,

Something is missing - please come back,

Time to rekindle our astral connection,

Full speed ahead in the right direction,

Focused on a one way divine destination,

No return journey and no hesitation,

Rest your head on the shoulders of mine,

No more laying our loveontheline.

◄ By the Book

Perfect Punk - Perfect Day ►

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Tom Doolan

Thu 31st Oct 2013 21:36

Thanks guyz for your nice comments

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Thomas J Steele

Wed 30th Oct 2013 11:40

Hi Tom, I love this. It is so strait to the point about falling in and out of love, very real and heartfelt.

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Starfish

Tue 29th Oct 2013 20:42

I think this is really beautiful. Love it.
Best Wishes Starfish

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