Cradle - A Triolet

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(An old post but as we're nearing mid-summer's day...)

 

The cradle of all – the living, the dead                                                  

Where Sol and Lahanna hold thrones,                                                 

Where many a sacrifice leached earth red;                                         

The cradle of all – the living, the dead;                                                 

Sol guarantees bounty and harvests that fed                                     

We worshipers at these stones;                                                             

The cradle of all – the living, the dead                                                  

Where Sol and Lahanna hold thrones.                                                 

 

The cradle of all – the living, the dead                                                  

By light of Lahanna is shown;

She makes both nightly and monthly her tread;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead -                                                

The circle by which our women have bled

Having their childness outgrown;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead                                                  

By light of Lahanna is shown.

 

The cradle of all – the living, the dead

By moonlight in winter winds blown

We danced to Lahanna with white robes shed;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead;

Then filed down the Causeway by Elders led

Who chanted in hypnotic tones;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead

By moonlight in winter winds blown.

 

The cradle of all – the living, the dead

Where no-one is ever alone,

Where ancestors lived and ancestors bred -

The cradle of all – the living, the dead;

Their spirits and souls to the netherworld fled;

We buried in barrows their bones;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead

Where no-one is ever alone;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead

Where no-one is ever alone. 

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 23rd Jun 2013 14:43

John,
I noted this but had my nose to the poetic grindstone.

It minds me of reading somewhere that the real business of poetry is to re-awaken the feeling of myth (a pre-religous sort of reverential awe at the existence of mystery)

The lightly chanting repetitive form of this, coupled with the references to birth and death really do re-create that mythical atmosphere.

( and - for this one - the picture fits perfectly)

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Ian Whiteley

Sat 22nd Jun 2013 17:57

great stuff John - one of the more complicated rhyme forms I think - because the rhyme pattern is easy enough - but making sense of the whole thing by using that pattern is where the real skill is at - and I think you've done this expertly
Ian

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 17th Jun 2013 12:02

Time presses - I will be back - it looks fascinating.

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