His love for me is like the sea, As deep as it is wide

Seaswept by him

Stormed by blue eyes

Sucked in


I'm debris in his whirlpool

I'm driftwood on his tide

I'm held in squalling waters

I'm anchored by his sighs


Soaked to the skin

I'm pulled under

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joe kozarzewski

Fri 3rd Jul 2015 16:43

I like all the words in this poem, which feels very heartfelt!

Wendy Hollis

Thu 15th Apr 2010 16:41

I loved this! 'Soaked to the skin I'm pulled under'!

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 16th Jan 2010 08:06

I have just found this too and it is lovely, full of longing and a sort of helplessness, that's how it seems to me anyway.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 15th Jan 2010 13:05

Also terrific. How did I miss this last year? Thanks for reading and commenting on Waiting For Mummy.

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 9th Mar 2009 18:51

Hi Louise, had it been raining heavily when you wrote this? Ha, its lovely really, see you thurs at Wigan, Jeff X

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