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Potry Brew- Haiku

Hiya,

I was disappointed to miss the Poetry Brew.  Here are the haiku's I wrote for the occasion.  And although haiku traditionally address nature- mine are on human nature. 

 

oh office affair

leaving pregnant wife at home

poor her, lucky you

 

can't have must have ex

goodbye-sex a mountain peak

valley follows this

 

raining after work

borrow a nice umbrella

harried leave on train

◄ A Walk in the Park

His love for me is like the sea, As deep as it is wide ►

Comments

darren thomas

Sun 5th Oct 2008 14:56

Yeah, c'mon Louise, these are very lame for Haiku - buck up!

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Sat 4th Oct 2008 12:49

Hi Louise,
Your Haiku's brought a little smile of knowing about modern living.
Sorry you missed it Thursday.
Hope to see you next time.
Love Janet.xx

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Rodney Wood

Fri 3rd Oct 2008 20:40

The main thing about haiku is there should have a wow factor but these are rather subdued.

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