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Hi Tom, Love the narrative style of this poem.I especially enjoyed the last stanza with the marrying of the cold and the hatching of a relationship; 'my mother and father were still skating around the possibilities of a life together' Nice one;great illustrations too
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<Deleted User> (6315)
Tue 16th Apr 2013 22:01
Thoroughly enjoyed the read too. I shall take a look through your other stuff now..
Thanks for the comment on my write too :)