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SPLIT INFINITY

We live in a world full of isms

Life seen through distorting prisms

Common sense gets no deference

Equality can mean preference

And society's a sequence of schisms!

◄ THE PRIMROSE - a reprint

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 24th Mar 2013 02:26

JC - I'm thinking of writing a poem in the
Elizabethan style (otter be good) title:
"To His Koi - fishless" -
when I need a change from the demanding dexterity of this present post!

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John Coopey

Sat 23rd Mar 2013 18:39

It's said that I'm guilty of many any "ism"
(Most frequently people say, 'plagiarim')
But these I refute;
Though I'll not dispute
I'm happy confessing to onanism.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 23rd Mar 2013 17:08

Harry - Perhaps I should write - "Equality can mean preference". Claims for "equality" often seem cloaked demands for having your cake and eating it too. The word itself requires constant vigilance if it is not to be distorted in a world that uses and abuses the English language "to suit" an agenda.

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Harry O'Neill

Sat 23rd Mar 2013 15:12


M.C.
Unusual choice of rhymes. they work through
stressing the rest of it in the right way.

The whole thing reminds me of Shakespeare`s
words about keeping the road as well as any man
(something like that)

It seems to me that fourth line is self -defeating of the whole idea.

Still like it though.

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