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Toast.

 

 

Toast.

 

I could smell toast as I opened the door;

toast I had eaten hours before and

this happy aroma had altered the room.

The ghostly, particulate breath of perfume,

unbidden and soluble memories of you,

were replaced by the comfort it formerly knew.

But the difference imparted a subtler tone

to the savoury silence of being alone

and solitude’s offer of freedom and peace

concealed in the giving a limited lease.

                        

 

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Comments

Travis Brow

Wed 13th Feb 2013 06:57

Thank you Tony, Dave. The fact you recognise your own experiences in others' work is the only meaningful validation; for me, at least.

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Dave Bradley

Fri 8th Feb 2013 20:51

Very evocative. Been there!

tony sheridan

Fri 8th Feb 2013 19:54

Smell can be like a Time Machine. Sometimes a smell will take me back to childhood. Take care, Tony.

Travis Brow

Mon 4th Feb 2013 10:30

Thanks John, i've often thought smell the most powerful of the senses. Apparently, some scientists now think there are quantum aspects involved.

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John Coopey

Fri 1st Feb 2013 21:13

very effective imagery, Travis. The most effective of all though is the image of the smell of toast. (there must be a word like "imagery" that refers to senses other than the visual!)

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