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First Night Of Snow

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The world has gone to bed
Under clean sheets
 
Snow a foot deep
Is covering the rotten leaves of the yard,
 
The wheelbarrow and cedar logs
Are sleeping too.
 
That night nothing happens-
Dreams fill with static,
Faces go hidden,
No words are said.
 
A silence of falling
Cuts out all echoes.
 
Even the cat,
First across the new world,
Can hear itself breathing.

 

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Tom Harding

Sat 8th Sep 2012 20:13

Thanks all- agree with the static!

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 7th Sep 2012 19:42

Love the opening two lines!
All in all, a pleasing portent of winter.

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Isobel

Fri 7th Sep 2012 17:08

This is lovely. You do capture that lovely hush of falling snow. I see what Harry means about the static - no doubt that has assocations for you - are you trying to find an original image for warmth, I wonder?

An enjoyable read, even though it heralds a winter I'm not much looking forward to.

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 7th Sep 2012 15:41


Tom,
This is full of a silent softness.

(but I`m not sure about the `static`)

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