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jiyuu ni naritai

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i tell myself this is just a phase
so i dont have 2fight this endless craze
minds caught up; unforgivn maze
euphoria drink smoke away the dayz
struggle 2c thru the blackz nd grayz
crossroadz mark the turn of age
sweet mornin breeze with the scent of sage
take a breath with ease but stil feel th rage
try to believe i can escape my mental cage
try to decieve my mind im not afraid
how can it be i still lack th courage
was blind to see the bright light start to fade
has destiny shown me the path which i must take
locked in a deep sleep from which i must awake
lord: please forgive me of my mistakes
lord: help me prevail please god forsake
kinou,       i was lost
kyou,        i am found
ashita,      i will rise up and i shall stand my ground



*kinou       - japanese for yesterday
*kyou        - japanese for today
*ashita      - japanese for tomorrow

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Noetic-fret!

Mon 23rd Feb 2009 03:22

Wow! This is a really nice poem. I like the japanese wordage at the end.
Mike

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Andy N

Mon 1st Dec 2008 00:02

Good stuff, Gabriella... Bit different to your other stuff I have read as I don't think this has the same rap like quality.. No bad thing I think as I think it is good a writer looks at things constantly in different styles. Keep it going!

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