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In bed at twilight

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Just two hours’ sleep for meeting day two

After an all night drink and chat session

In pub, restaurant and hotel bar, with new

Gossip and old work worries all touched on

I couldn’t sleep on the train so upon

Returning home I flopped onto the bed

Barely the energy to undress from

Work clothes. Lay there, feeling pulse in my head

Throbbing as though I was running ahead

Of the pack up some hillside I used to

Race up some years ago (I never won)

Two hours I lay as darkness slowly spread

But not to my eyes as I thought of you

Counting minutes till solitude is gone

◄ Advice on dying

The end is nigh, I hope ►

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 22nd Nov 2008 12:09

Hi Tony, You're aparty animal mate thats your problem! Ha! Hope you had a good time and see you at Midd? Jeff

Pete Crompton

Sun 16th Nov 2008 13:23

Hi Atoni, yes I know the feeling here, did you wake up not knowing what time it was where you were? I think you could develop this theme into a set of poems on the road, travel always lends itself to writing dont you think?

With this poem I feel you are starting to get going and It leaves me wanting to know more!

Those hotel rooms, are they bland, the journey...

'ahead of the pack up some hilldside' my fave line and one that begins to set the imagination running itself

Looking forward to some road trip stuff! :-)

Pete

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Andy N

Sun 16th Nov 2008 10:55

I take it - you had matchsticks in your eyes after that then - lol

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