He stood and stared
at the socks in his hand.
She lay an arm accross
her face.
He made to sit
on the edge of the bed.
She moved her legs.
He turned.
She sighed
at what lay ahead.
He squeezed her foot.
She turned her gaze to him.
He said:
''We will make it through this day...''
words and foto T carroll
just read because of Win's piece.. quite different but just as good.
I've only caught up with this cos of Winston's recent poem. I think it's great in its . . . enigmatic-ness!
This is terrific.
But I don't get your most recent comment to my profile. What have I missed? God knows, I'm missing lots these days.
Missed this first time around Tommy, sorry
Intriguing...has hints of fear, tragedy, and you know what else it reminds me of, although it's been a bloody long time since I read it...The Age of Reason by Sartre.
posted something up in the blogs tommy. Win X
Tommy, thx. I will have a go. Win x
Hi Tommy. simple words lending themselves to maximum interpretation from the reader. What I am tempted to do is to fill in the 'gaps' by writing 5 lines to insert after the lines begining with 'she'. I wonder if it would make a good or more diluted result? What do you think. Win X
<Deleted User> (10123)
Sat 31st Mar 2012 09:56
This day of What? I must know; can you put me out of my misery! Please! Ta muchly, Nick.
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<Deleted User> (10123)
Fri 20th Apr 2012 12:35
You is powerful boy. give us some grits an we will watch this relationship with some tender thoughts in our souls. Wow, bloody good but do you feel it's finished? Love it, chow for now, Nick. p.s. been absent for a bit sorry for delay.