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Vertigo

One day I shall kill myself

hurtling down the Wyche Cutting

then I won’t be laughing

quite so much.

I smile at her logic

as I lean on the zenith.

 

Worcestershire lies,

a page spread to edit.

I can touch the horizon,

I could race someone on it

like cyclists careering

round an unbroken circuit

wondering who’s in the lead.

 

I smooth out the contours,

moving smudges from edges

to see if I’m the winner

and dip my fingers in a splash

of shimmer, daub a little azure,

ochre and verdure

on the large marquee

where the flags fly over.

 

Three counties are captured

in the corner of an eyelid;

a paraglider lands

in a spot unsighted;

dog shows and flower shows

with kids entertainment.

I’ll paint a gay coloured

gipsy encampment

and refuse to sign

the petition of protest.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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fiona sinclair

Tue 27th Mar 2012 09:45

wonderful, loved the imagery, felt the speed of the careering bike.

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Mon 26th Mar 2012 11:10

for a minute their i thought i was racing... good one Ray

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Ray Miller

Sun 25th Mar 2012 22:00

Thanks, Nick. At my age it's more likely the cycle to the top will kill me than the descent.

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Nick Coleman

Sun 25th Mar 2012 12:57

Paints a great picture, and more, Ray. (and also it reminds me of childhood races down the escarpment of the South Downs on bikes with no brakes)

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