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Five Thirty am

In the utter darkness the fine piping of birds begins another dawn.

The insistent cat pushes between my fingers and the open page.

There is a meaning in the poise of my face and pen before the page,

But the cat has no knowledge of it.

 

She pushes her whole black purring self across my face.

Her paws step softly on the paper.

She thrusts her head against the moving pen.

She speaks in liquid murmurs, a tremble in her purring.

The meaning to her is between one living thing and another.

 

Nothing to her, the travelling of a pen across a page.

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Freda Davis

Wed 21st Mar 2012 12:12

Thank you all. Glad to please.

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Lynn Dye

Tue 20th Mar 2012 21:45

Enjoyed this, Freda. Typically feline, I think. Mind you, it reminds me of my little dog stepping onto my laptop!

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Tue 20th Mar 2012 21:13

'Liquid murmurs' Delightful. I love the way you can travel a pen across the page. Many thanks, Nick.

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Yvonne Brunton

Tue 20th Mar 2012 12:51

this is wonderful. My cat always helps me to write -she takes the pen from me, at first cautiously, gently, then with an eye blink, lightening strike of raptor claws she chases it across the desk, the bed, the kitchen worktop.Whether this is a comment on the quality of my work (or lack thereof) or because she has poetic ambitions of her own, I don't know. Maybe she's just hungry.
PS boy you rise early!

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Laura Taylor

Tue 20th Mar 2012 09:28

I think this captures that quiet time of early morning and the insistence of mogs really well. Love this line 'her paws step softly on the paper' - sounds wonderful. I thought this described the person-cat relationship very well.

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Tue 20th Mar 2012 06:42

Purrfect pleasurable poetry.

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