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Ladies who lunch
 
Wine has over rouged your cheeks.
Bouncing up ,  you must show me 
why “Mathematics is truth” ,on your iPhone.
Whilst behind a rictus grin
I try to calm my screaming thoughts
in the aftermath of the letter bomb that exploded 
on my door mat earlier this morning ;
which I do not mention because it is your birthday.
 

 

The Room (revised) ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 17th Mar 2012 18:21

Superb, like a bullet into the mind, leaving a gasp, almost a choke.

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fiona sinclair

Sun 11th Mar 2012 14:06

Thanks everyone

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Andy N

Sun 11th Mar 2012 10:25

lot said in a short piece, Fiona.. very skillfully wrote indeed..

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Gus Jonsson

Sun 11th Mar 2012 10:07


A facet of a drama in a blink, a flash back scene in a playlette ... I agree with Ann...

Who ? Where? When? How? and Why?

Gus x



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Ann Foxglove

Sun 11th Mar 2012 06:57

Very intriguing - making you want to know more indeed!

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