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Mistress Rachel

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In the mind and on the flesh sense the crop’s keen edge

Hear the swish and feel the thresh; Mistress will oblige.

One’s for you; the second’s mine; the third is born in rage

Three red welts in perfect line; Mistress will oblige.

Pain and pleasure where you can, constrained by penile cage;

Dirty, dirty, little man; Mistress will oblige.

Offer prostrate, serf and slave; address me “Lady Liege”

I possess the pain you crave; Mistress will oblige.

Fetishes of feet and facial, sins you seek to purge,

Properties of Mistress Rachel; Mistress will oblige.

◄ Clitoris

Kranp ►

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John Coopey

Sun 22nd Jan 2012 09:43

Thanks for commenting on Mistress Rachel. Not so much a fertile imagination as writing what I know about!

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 19th Jan 2012 13:36

One minute it's train spotting then this? Are you alright old boy??

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 19th Jan 2012 09:29

I think this is rather good!

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Isobel

Thu 19th Jan 2012 08:46

I see you managed to get your foot fetish in again John!

I like your experimentation - with different styles - it is unusual for you not to rhyme. I think it works well enough - no need to beat yourself up - leave it to your mistress ;) x

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 19th Jan 2012 01:10

Reminds me of the old joke:
Masochist: "Beat me, beat me!"
Sadist: "No."
JC - I see the imagination is as fertile as ever.

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Rachel Bond

Thu 19th Jan 2012 00:55

is your likeness to JC in an y way similar to my likeness to your mistress? there are a few men who kind of dribble and you do want to hurt them, but i keep out the game as i have enough rage to proper kill you all.i take pain very seriously

john you are asking for trouble xx

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John Coopey

Thu 19th Jan 2012 00:08

Tried a structure of mid-line assonance and end-line consonance. Not as I thought it would be - but no need to beat myself up about it. (There again.....)

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