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Jack Frost's Army

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They come from the Himalayas,

From the Russian Steppes,

The Norwegian pine forests ……. running, running, running.

Faster than sound,

Colder than glass,

Harder than rock,

Over the pond

Onto the steps,

Up to the windows,

To bush, twig and grass.

The garden quivers,

Clamps the bud to bark,

The insect to leaf ….. leaf glues tight to leaf, to leaf, to grief.

Ponds pull their icy shutters over,

Send the newts and fish

To the depths …. they’re here!

Frost strikes: sucks the life

From shoot and root,

Spears the branch

With crystal daggers.

Runs amok with pointed feet

And sharp white arrows,

Like Atilla the Hun …… they smother, colour, cover.

The morning curtains swish,

And kids warm noses

Steam the windows.

The brown and black of winter

Now silver and grey ..….daggers in the day.

Outside, the grass is brittle as toast,

The seed heads frozen.

The starving bird pierced through songless chest.

Silent, they wait to ambush your fingers,

Slip icy sheets from under your feet.

Pull tears from your eyes... icy cries under frosty skies.

Only in sun

Will they slip, slip, slip,

Drip away.

Watch Out!  Jack Frost’s army’s about!

winter. nature

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Val Cook

Fri 25th Nov 2011 23:57

This is a brilliant poem Jane,every line works. Love it.

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jane wilcock

Fri 25th Nov 2011 20:47

Just scraping the ice from the computer monitor to thank you for the comments!

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Lynn Dye

Fri 25th Nov 2011 20:04

Wonderfully descriptive poem, Jane. Think you might be responsible for a big surge in the power tonight though!! ;) Enjoyed.

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Nick Coleman

Fri 25th Nov 2011 18:50

Cold enough tonight even before I read this, but having read have turned up heating. Reminded me of our curtains tearing when drawing if frozen to the window panes.

Philipos

Fri 25th Nov 2011 18:28

Refreshingly descriptive this Jane - brrr quite sent a shiver down my back. Well done.

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Isobel

Fri 25th Nov 2011 15:31

What a great picture you paint Jane - I could feel myself icing up. Lovely use of language and repetition and great to see you back on here! xx

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