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STREAPS BOTHY - a memory of hiking in Scotland

Misty, come the memories

Of long departed days,

Reminding me of happy times

Spent walking Highland ways.

Distant mountain silhouettes

Like giants stand and stare,

To tell me that I've long since left

But they're still waiting there.

 

The images of those I knew

I see in my mind's eye.

They pass before me even now

As then they passed me by;

Ghosts now in that wild place,

There's nothing to be seen -

No sound of laughter...talk of friends,

To mark where I have been. 

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 20th Nov 2011 00:09

One place we stopped was that isolated cottagethat features in many pictures of Glencoe - butwe still managed to find somewhere to have a drink! But I know about the rain (in the Cairngorms) tho', thankfully, not so much of being bitten by the bugs. Maybe I was not to their taste!Man leaves his footprint in so much that it isalways welcome to know there are places whereit seems to be - even if it isn't quite - absent.

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Sat 19th Nov 2011 21:47

I have memories of it pissing down and then being bitten to death when it's not, but in it's moment it is a truly beautiful place and your poem captures some of it's melancholy, Rannoch Moor being one of the most desolate places on earth.

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John Coopey

Sat 19th Nov 2011 18:46

I seem to remember somewhere in Tolkien he says that the word "hill" is so small a word for something so huge and old.
There seems a theme, which I think you've already remarked upon, of man's lack of footprint on the Earth.

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