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Russet Rustlings

I rustle through crisp clusters of lost, crunching leaves

Which gather, bunched and rusting russet, in the thickets

And sniff the wafting, musty, fusty, rustic scents

Of fungal undergrowth amongst sparse, once-lush bushes.

 

Last, rash, brash leaflets stick to sycamore and ash

But soon shall slip their tenuous grips and hustle, fluttering

To forest’s floor to settle, nestled in moist mash

To match the close-lopped, coppiced brushwood’s patchwork carpet.

 

Thin, drifting drizzle misting in swift, whispering winds

Will filter, sifting through the mulch and mix it richly

To squash to slushy mush through which I’ll dash and splash

In childish haste to rush as foolish passions grasp me.

 

This lasts until stiff fingers of first, harsh hoar-frosts

Soft sprinkle glistening glitter on the shrinking litter,

Skins stripped to skeletons of gossamer and twig,

Which vanish, ghostlike in snow’s muffling kiss of winter.

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<Deleted User> (6315)

Tue 25th Oct 2011 22:35

To squash to slushy mush through which I’ll dash and splash

Thought the above was just precious..great read..once I got my tongue into gear.. :)

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Oct 2011 16:02

I agree with MCN (the poet, not Motor Cycle News).
Very evocative and clever how you use words to suggest smells.
Versatile too, as I know you've done a fair amount of excellent rhythmic stuff.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 24th Oct 2011 15:45

There are reminders here of Laurence Binyon's poem "The Burning of the Leaves" and that is one of my favourites.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 24th Oct 2011 15:36

You can really smell the arrival of autumn and
see the annual transformation as one season gives way to another. I am a "versifier" but if I wasn't, this would be my style. Affinity
and observation in equal measure. Nice work!

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