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Summat and Nuffin

Heard before seen him approaching train station;

bubbles of sound that he blows for beguiling

the purposive hordes in panting impatience –

his smile isn’t worn by the faces that file in.

 

Sat cross-legged, upturned hat on the pavement,

he struggles with platform announcements and sirens 

which furnish the ears and leave the eyes vacant,

which crave our attention while he counsels silence.

 

Reed in his lips, I can guess what has struck him;

he’s thinking most likely I’ll try to resist his

unswervable dogs known as Summat and Nuffin,

essential accoutrements of the business.

 

Watered and feted at Job Seekers’ Centres,

on Christian name terms with impressionable staff,

indifferent to mutterings, envy and censure

hissed behind Times and The Telegraph.

 

Crowd management experts, bred ‘specially for buskers,

shitting in gutters and sniffing the legs

of drinking men gathered in penitent clusters

for hair of the dog and repeat offence.

 

Cornered commuters at morning assembly

seek higher authority, fidget and shrug,

fumble in pockets to empty for entry:

Summat and Nuffin share victory hugs!

 

Amidst cigarette endings and takeaway cartons

the Pied Piper pauses and praises in earnest.

It’s work but it’s art and they play a good part on

the stage of this piss, spit and sawdust surface.

 

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Ray Miller

Wed 26th Oct 2011 15:32

Thanks, Isobel and Dave.
Funnily enough, I sound like a polystyrene cup with green paint in it too. Uncanny, isn't it?

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Dave Carr

Fri 21st Oct 2011 17:34

Enjoyed this. I had to read it a few times to get the rhythm to work. I like the bubbles of sound image and sirens that furnish the ears and leave the eyes vacant.
Good subject.
Dave

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Isobel

Thu 20th Oct 2011 14:22

You've got me thinking of Fagin and Oliver Twist with this one Ray - you draw a vivid street picture. There is always a tendency to feel sorry for animals that live out on the streets like this but I imagine many of them may have better lives than those penned up at home alone while the owners work...

You've got some very imaginative rhyming goin on in here - it must have taken ages! I liked the verse about the business men and the hair of the dog. You should try recording some of your stuff Ray. Now we know that you look like a polystyrene cup with green paint in it, it would be nice to hear your voice. xx

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