really
feels unreal, really
it really does feel unreal.
Feels unreally real.
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Hi Dave,
I like the altered usage of repeated words- I think I know where this comes from though I could be wrong.
Never ending sky
faultlessly blue, earth moving
golden California
My Best
Chris
<Deleted User> (7212)
Fri 23rd Sep 2011 10:30
reminds me of...
"I knew a man called O'Reilly"
"Oh, really ?"
"No, O'Reilly"
Philosophical Haiku
Tautologically exact.
Makes one reach out desperately for some sort of a rock.
good-un
(Incidentally, are there many satirical Haiku
around - or is this a contradiction in terms?)
Well, you've got the break in there, but I can't see a season, although you do have a 'sense' in the feeling part.
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<Deleted User> (6315)
Fri 30th Sep 2011 22:24
And I bet now it feels really real?..