Brrr!
Unrecognised
your autumn face
auburn draping silver-greys
a wind flicks a mist lifts
a shiver from the mirror
Comments
Thanks, chaps. Very kind of you.Steve's done well with his epic.
Have you lent Steve Black your pencil?
He's just posted a veritable epic whilst you've done a "short".
I agree with Graham, though. The brevity doesn't detract at all from the impact.
Teasingly good Ray. It might be the contents of a mere blink, but sometimes they stick in the memory.
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Philipos
Mon 19th Sep 2011 21:11
Short but very sweet.