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Advantage

Advantage, me

I served a good point

The ball was in your court

And your return hit the net

But somehow you still won the game

Because you don’t play by the rules

Because you hijack the umpire’s stool

Because when your serves are tame

You award yourself a let

So I’ve been taught

There’s just no point

Disadvantage, me

◄ Nice and easy does it

Stars stuck ►

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 1st Aug 2008 21:13

Like this, the way you've turned it round, great lines, although I thought the tennis had finished! cheers Jeff

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carol falaki

Fri 1st Aug 2008 09:41

eye off the ball?
love all
so no net?
game set.
a super poem Antonioni

<Deleted User> (5646)

Thu 31st Jul 2008 23:32

Nope. sorry. not on this occasion !!!

<Deleted User> (5646)

Thu 31st Jul 2008 23:00

Oh yeah! Just like a man! Give in.
This isn't meant to be a tennis courtship sonnet is it Antoninoni? There's two painted lines missing.
Advantage me.
Your serve.
Janet.xx

<Deleted User> (3509)

Thu 31st Jul 2008 22:43

beautiful idea of tennis and love. Ha ha love. That says it all. Nice one Antionioni

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