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Paths

There’s a path near his home

curves this way and that

across the rough ground.

Logically it should be straight.

But people have made it that way.

 

There is a path near his heart,

which curves that way and this

across rough ground.

No doubt it should be straight.

But people have made it that way.

 

There’s a path in his life,

which is beyond all tracing,

ricocheting over rough ground.

How could it possibly be straight?

People have made it that way.

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Lisa Milligan

Fri 26th Aug 2011 22:30

This is deep - one of those, "there's more to this than meets the eye" poems. The first verse sets the tone, the second and third hold truths that are sad and have an air of resignation. Great write.

Lisa

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Francine

Fri 3rd Jun 2011 17:38

I love the idea of paths, and this resonates so well with me.
Thank you!

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Greg Freeman

Thu 2nd Jun 2011 20:46

Yes, I was looking for this one and couldn't see it immediately. Wanted to say that I liked it very much, Dave: those paths take more twists and turns as the years go by.

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Thu 2nd Jun 2011 11:06

I feel part of this poem

<Deleted User> (6315)

Thu 2nd Jun 2011 10:28

It is good to read something that allows you to end up smiling in agreement when you come to the end..clever write Dave :o)

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