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Trainspotting

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(A Journey of Nostalgia)

 

I journeyed but once from the old Hucknall Central,

A station now gone on the GCR line;

Its imprint on memory, though, quite monumental

Made mystically precious by passage of time.

 

The floors and the stairways so basically timbered;

They echoed our footsteps; we ran without stop;

We carried Ian Allans with sequences numbered

And jotters and pens and a bottle of pop.

 

Then pushing and jostling embarking the carriage

To get a compartment that’s all to ourselves;

Three heads through a window as best we could manage

Then clambering onto the net luggage shelves.

 

The city of Nottingham our destination,

A trainspotting Mecca of juvenile joys;

The dark and foreboding Victoria Station

Almost a cathedral to 12 year old boys.

 

Victorian workmanship, proud and expressive,

And hewn in a cutting of hard sandstone rock;

Its length and its curvature doubly impressive

The calm reassurance of Smith’s platform clock.

 

And then the reward for our day’s expedition -

The sweet expectation a rumour would bring;

The racing and shouts that confirmed the suspicion -

The spot of occasional Castle or King.

 

Evading the watch of the slow railway bobbies

Patrolling at Colwick or Annesley shed;

How to explain this most pointless of hobbies

Which only resides in the heart, not the head?

 

The pain of nostalgia is real and not mental;

Victoria Centre’s a new shopping mall

And Lidl replaces the old Hucknall Central;

The march of modernity’s taken its toll.

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Lynn Dye

Thu 26th May 2011 10:35

I enjoyed this too, John, and agree with Greg's comment about Lidl etc. Good flow, and a good abab too! ;) x

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Greg Freeman

Wed 25th May 2011 23:10

Really enjoyed this, John. If you 'cabbed' one it was a C with a ring round it, n'est-ce pas? The saddest, most poignant line in this for me was "Lidl replaces the old Hucknall Central". If anyone wants to know how and why the country's gone to the dogs, they should read this poem.

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John Coopey

Wed 25th May 2011 12:58

Your Ian Allan was your bible. You entered up new spots back at home from your jotter, with carefully ruled underlines. I got my first one in 1963 - it cost me 11/6.

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