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Once I followed a prophet

Step by step

He walked a little ahead.

Until I passed through a doorway

That was framed only for me,

no longer did I follow a prophet

he walked a little ahead

and I let him go.


◄ in another life

Standing in the 'lost child light' ►


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Andy N

Tue 10th May 2011 08:17

A few layers on this for me too, Carole - the ending particulars works well for me with the end but I really like it x

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Mon 9th May 2011 17:10

Have read this a number of times Carole and like the enigma of it. There could be a number of interpretations. The one that leaps out most to me is perhaps the loss of religious faith. I suppose it could also apply to the loss of faith in a person - the decision to go it alone and the parting of ways. The fact that it is under the Escape umbrella would indicate that your previous condition was a negative one.

I like the simplicity of it - it works.

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