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Goldfishfinger

Two goldfish swimming round and round their bowl

Do they long for the lakes, rivers and seas?

Do they get on, or are they perhaps poles

Apart, two different personalities?

Would they like their own bowl one day, if fees

Are not too high, not too much interest due?

Or do they go with the flow, although these

Bowls don’t have flows, tides or that much to do?

Some people put pirate ships in there. Crew

On deck! Swim to attention! One just rolls

Upside down all day long; the fat one. He’s

Fed up, maybe, with his lot, trying to

End it all. The small one’s a happy soul.

Two goldfish living out their lives of ease.

◄ Doctor, my eyes

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 9th Jul 2008 00:31

Or do they go with the flow! Nice one, like that Antonio, just watching my fish now! cheers jeff

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Richard Brooks

Tue 8th Jul 2008 11:05

the image of a goldfish trying to end it all was very nostalgic. an image of my uncle pacing the room (a strange habit) he looks at the floor "is this someone's goldfish?" they must get very confused considering they will forget why they are committing goldfish suicide!

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Mon 7th Jul 2008 21:51

I think that clash with the roundabout warped your sense of justice.
It's not easy you know, swimming round and round all day with sod all else to do. Staring at the same walls of silence as they come back round. It's enough to make anyone want to commit hari-kari, jump out and take a chance.

So happy to hear you're ok after yesterdays skid. Love Janet.xxx

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