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Car Crash Blowjob

The silver blue car bellowed on the road. Lights flashed passing per milisecond.She pulled faster. He slammed on the accelerator. One hand out the window fisting the sky. Frictionessly she grappled at it. The music roared. Backseats rattling with empty lager bottles and broken picture frames. She changed hands. Bent down further. Gave it a lick. He waved at the sky in return, rhythm. She began to suck that fucker. He began to sing 'la patanera.' She bobbed away. Amphetamine jellyfish. Gasped far air. Went again. Both hands clasped. This was it. He was aiming to hit the chorus on the beat. She knew it was happening. It was her moment too.

 And....

 Then.......

CRASH

 An oncoming truck. HEAD on. No passengers. The truck driver is higher. Up on the metal hill. Now without knees. After the sliding he grinds from the sideseat. Hits the ground with almost a full torso. Makes his way crawling dragging weak arms across smashed glass. Reaches the car. Both definitely dead. Front wrecked stacked into truck. The man's cock pierced through the back of her skull. Still hard. Brain matter on foreskin. the truck driver stares and after a moment

LAUGHS

then dies.

◄ Fire On The Outskirts Of Perth.

Mood Translation One: Warehouse ►

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melanie coady

Tue 8th Mar 2011 15:03

ha ha ha luv it bro

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Fkx

Sun 20th Feb 2011 07:45

Not quite sure it was too happy as they both didn't seem to reach their o's. Neither did the truck driver for that matter. Such a waste of effort on their part. It seems only your poetry gave justice to their misadventure.

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winston plowes

Fri 11th Feb 2011 00:32

I am sorry to tell you mr Coady... you have failed your driving test.

<Deleted User> (7212)

Thu 10th Feb 2011 21:37

Aw, C'mon Laura - surely HalfManHalfBiscuit have done summat appropriate ?? :D

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Laura Taylor

Thu 10th Feb 2011 14:28

Ever heard that Cramps song, Bend Over I'll Drive? I think you'd like that.

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Lucy Marsh

Wed 9th Feb 2011 18:05

Well isn't this charming?! Lol x

<Deleted User> (7212)

Wed 9th Feb 2011 17:41

Phew ! - I thought for a moment we were going to have an unhappy ending !
(I love happy endings)

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