Cradle - A Triolet

entry picture

 

The cradle of all – the living, the dead                                                                    

Where Sol and Lahanna hold thrones,                                                                   

Where many a sacrifice leached earth red;                                                          

The cradle of all – the living, the dead;                                                                  

Sol guarantees bounty and harvests that fed                                                     

We worshipers at these stones;                                                                                               

The cradle of all – the living, the dead                                                                    

Where Sol and Lahanna hold thrones.                                                                   

 

The cradle of all – the living, the dead                                                                    

By light of Lahanna is shown;

She makes both nightly and monthly her tread;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead -                                                                 

The circle by which our women have bled

As soon as their childness has flown;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead                                                                    

By light of Lahanna is shown.

 

The cradle of all – the living, the dead

By moonlight in winter winds blown

We danced to Lahanna with white robes shed;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead;

Then filed down the Causeway by Elders led

Who chanted in hypnotic tones;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead

By moonlight in winter winds blown.

 

The cradle of all – the living, the dead

Where no-one is ever alone,

Where ancestors lived and ancestors bred -

The cradle of all – the living, the dead;

As spirits and souls to the netherworld fled;

We buried in barrows their bones;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead

Where no-one is ever alone;

The cradle of all – the living, the dead

Where no-one is ever alone.

◄ Breakfast of Champions

Dead Men's Shoes ►

Comments

Profile image

Ann Foxglove

Fri 28th Jan 2011 06:45

Have you ever been compared to Leonard Cohen before John? I seem to think you are more cheery! ;-) x

Profile image

Tom Harding

Wed 26th Jan 2011 22:39

i like the theatrics of this. it reminds me of a leonard cohen song - possibly 'the faith' - which is a villanelle, i think? it has a similar hypnotic repetition to that form.

Profile image

John Coopey

Wed 26th Jan 2011 22:23

This is a b*gger to do what with it only having 2 rhymes. But the repetition does seem to lend a certain juh nuh seh kwah.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message