Unborn Child Of The World
Unborn child of the world
you could have been the world
9 months you were alive
long enough to make us cry
your soul has never died
your memories still alive
You know this life is obsurd
your life it did not deserve
Unborn child of the world
you know your welcome to return
in anyone you choose
another entity if you prefer
I hope to see you there
Unborn child of the world
you have a piece of the earth
we lay flowers there
you could have been so great
but they intervened too late
Unborn child of the world
your dancing with your mother
in the greenest fields
you wish she didn't go too
maybe she wanted to be there for you
time is like a duel
between the sun and moon
sometimes dark and sometimes light
someone lost in the night
Unborn child of the world
we lost you so soon
now heaven has improved
You were not here for long
but we noticed that your gone
<Deleted User> (5646)
Thu 26th Jun 2008 19:41
Thanks for confirming my feeling.
There is a certain amount of emotion in there, particularly in the last 4 lines.
I'm just one of those people who pick up on the sensitive issues within peoples writings. Some think that's a bit weird and it's got me into trouble on more than one occasion when i've opened my mouth to those who can't understand how i do it.
Keep up the good work, you'll go far.
love Janet.x