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The eighth sin

The eighth sin

Awkward pause
Empty silence
The room it tours
Attack of violence
Wounding all in its path
Imagine the tumbleweed
No one dares to laugh
As a laugh is a distant dream
Twiddling thumbs, tapping fingers
Getting no one anywhere
As the dead air starts to linger
People swap questioning stares
Then the small talk begins
People sigh in relief
Silence, the forgotten eighth sin
The one that causes tension and grief

◄ Painful truth

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Elaine Booth

Tue 11th Jan 2011 22:29

I enjoyed this - it makes the reader think and, yes, what you are saying is right. My son is a would-be x-box addict!

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 9th Jan 2011 10:39

your best posting so far Charlene-excellent! thanks-Stef.x

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