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Painful truth
Delusions
A series of desired illusions
Denial
Ignoring a bad situation for a while
Lies
The truth in your eyes
A smile
The result of effort that felt like running a mile
Truth
The pain no one can sooth
Acceptance
Facing the truth but it takes more than an instant
Reality
The honesty that leads to insanity
<Deleted User> (7789)
Sun 9th Jan 2011 20:46
I like this - it's short, to the point, and has a good structure and rhythm!
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Francine
Sat 29th Jan 2011 21:45
I like the way you've used rhyme, and the title of this - it fits well with your chosen words.