muted,
struck uselessly dumb.
things that need to be said,
stifled.

clashes against


unrestained,
suffocating in words,
underwhelmed by insignificance,
drowned.

either way it's the same.



◄ Freedom

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Dave Bradley

Mon 3rd Jan 2011 23:42

Provokes a strong feeling of being trapped. Powerful one, Kath

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Andy N

Mon 3rd Jan 2011 12:14

change in style for you here, Kath - and it's certainly more fragmented or raw, but i like it...

it's a good job however you don't perform poetry (unless you have changed your mind) as i would hate to try and perform this...

keep em coming, chick x

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 13:38

Very bleak - good to see you here again. Hope you're well. xx

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winston plowes

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 09:15

sounds like christmas Kath ? Win

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Isobel

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 09:01

From my experience the stifled is far, far worse than the unrestrained. With unrestrained you at least have a chance of one day being significant and starting to swim. It can happen - you just have to believe it.

Your poetry is so raw - it stirs a lot up for me. x

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