Just a moment dear

You're only up the stairs,

moved recently from view,

you hear my happy shout,

and yes, I love you too.


Only in our bedroom

putting something right,

frowning in concentration

with sleeves rolled up tight.


Capable hands and forearms,

you're smiling at my call,

whistling through your teeth,

tapping on the wall.


Only in the next room,

only up the stairs

eavesdropping on my prayers.

No distance at all.

◄ 42nd Noel

Rain after Snow ►


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Ann Foxglove

Sat 25th Dec 2010 22:07

I hope your day was a good one - keep well! xx


Fri 24th Dec 2010 22:52

A very moving poem which leaves much to the ' don't go there' imagination - it ticks the right boxes for me - and my seasonal best wishes also

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 24th Dec 2010 19:50

Yes, I think you should. xx

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Fri 24th Dec 2010 19:48

ah, one thing you could assist with - the last two lines, should i swap them round?

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 24th Dec 2010 19:48

Don't know what to say - but have a good christmas! xxxx

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