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Last month's poem of the month writer, Christine Bousfield, has chosen this month's poem. Christine says, "I like the energy, economy and strong sound patterning of this poem which reminds me a bit of Ted Hughes in its emphasis on the harshness of nature." Find out more about Carol and her work at http://www.writeoutloud.net/poets/carolthistlethwaite sanderlings on the beach – faded waders: six weeks of courtship's colour, bonding, mating, rearing - done and gone. Now their feathers wear the Arctic wind, colours pushed to spangled greys, snow bellies, match-stalk legs strike out at break-neck speed, their high-cute factor, hard as quartz, their sooty legs, strong as jet, their wave-chase games, ruthless as a tungsten beak, each a tundra surface melt, each a survivor, full of pretty flowers with permafrost beneath

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Carol Thistlethwaite

Sat 6th Dec 2008 23:49

Thanks Guys. I saw the sanderlings that inspired this poem at Rossall Point.

You're spot on Winston - this poem comes from my poetry book called 'from the field book' which is a collection of poems about British bird species. I describe the characteristic way different species behave - the aspects that guide books can't put into words - but I try!

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winston plowes

Sun 23rd Nov 2008 21:58

Hi Carol

The following is courtesy of the RSPB - "The sanderling is a small, plump, energetic wading bird. It has a short straight black bill and medium length black legs. It is pale grey above and white underneath. It does not breed in the UK, but is a winter visitor, journeying to and from their high Arctic breeding grounds." These are the facts but your words describe the Sanderling much better I feel.

Winston

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Sun 20th Jul 2008 15:09

I don't think these are penguins, Tomas. Wrong end of the planet. Penguins live near the Antarctic.
The poem has nice imagery. Suggests quick, lightly built shore birds. It puts the reader into the scene.


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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Tue 15th Jul 2008 16:58

Yes the imagery of the penguins is well shown here in this poem. Taking a little time with it, you could have made it rhyme a bit... but maybe you dont like to rhymei n your poetry...

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 1st Jul 2008 22:24

Carol, well done having your words chosen as poem of the month. Absolutely deserved. Lovely imagery. I like the hard/soft contrasts and allusions:
each a survivor, full of pretty flowers
with permafrost beneath
Thank you. And thank you for choosing it Christine.

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