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Smoking Outside

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This month's poem was chosen by Lynda Morgan. She chose it because, as she says " ... it evokes that lovely private time experienced when feeling in flow with your surroundings.  Good for the soul."

Find out more about Carol and her work: http://www.writeoutloud.net/poets/carolfalaki

Smoking Outside

The warm air lies flat on the dusk
as the sun pulls the last coral plume,
to a secret place
beyond the screen of impending darkness.

A startled blackbird screeches for safety,
hidden
in a shroud, dull jade
leaves
breath
quiet, at rest.

Silently,
across the low-growing ground,
the soft slimy creatures of the night
explore in the fading light,

Gone,
the fleeting illusion of a ghostly bat
as midges diffuse,

in the subtle smoke,
there is no conquest.

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