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Antique Zealot

Among the antiquities with attentive ambition

a bland beginning but burning and bold,

we carefully, cautiously, avoiding calamity,

disturb the dust; deliberate on detail;

examine the exhibits, eagle-eyed.

Feigning frivolity, going for gold,

you grip, you hold, happily chattering.

I avoid ivory; haunting instances of horror,

jaundiced ivory, stained with death in the detail,

carved kisses; knotted intricacy; learning of lost lives,

long unleashed lovers, missed moments of immortal intimacy.

Narrowly noted in old observations

among the photographs and personal memories,

not noticed between the over priced pearls

and the querulous porcelain, one perfect pebble

picked from obscurity by questing eyes.

No quibbles here on price or particulars,

slipped into negotiations with subtlety;

a small triumph, a rescued treasure

unearthed and verified by experts.

‘Yes, it is, yes’, with zest, ‘in the zone of zillions.’

◄ Tide Turn

I cross a moor where stars are white. ►

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Elaine Booth

Mon 15th Nov 2010 14:57

I enjoy your poems so much. Not so much the Ps (or Qs) as such wonderful alliteration!

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Noetic-fret!

Sat 13th Nov 2010 20:32

Hello Freda, yup, i agree with cynthia thomas. It is a marvellous poem that deserves more respect. Thank you for posting this one;- Quality is all i can say.

be well

mike

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Freda Davis

Fri 12th Nov 2010 13:13

There are a lot more P's than Q's.

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Ray Miller

Thu 11th Nov 2010 18:12

I enjoyed it, though I thought the 2nd line was a bit weak. You've got a lot of pees in there. Trying to tell us summat?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 10th Nov 2010 19:24

Fantastic! Masterful. A joy to enjoy for all the reasons that I love poetry. Your opening two lines take off like a speed boat setting the course for the whole poem. Superb among so many phrases are 'querulous porcelain' 'the zone of zillions' etc.

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