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Your Shadow

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Can’t make the dreaming stop
It spells the truth out right
For in the cold of night
I wish your shadow to return

Each captivating form
that danced in hidden doors
When boredom stalked my mind
Our shadows tricked the moon

Where dreaming haunts my soul
Your touch is ever present
I always reach for you
Though I’m afraid of shadows

And oh God how I love you
Though I could tell you not
Now you may never know
Unless your shadow should return.......

◄ My Friend the Ghost

Astray ►

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<Deleted User> (5646)

Sat 14th Jun 2008 07:07

However, the second read brought back more recent images of something very special.
thanks again.x

<Deleted User> (5646)

Sat 14th Jun 2008 07:04

Hi again, this reminds me of a time, not so very long ago really, when i too was afraid of "shadows". I'd be walking down the street and quite literally, a shadow would draw up beside me, as if to say,"oi, where do you think you're going without me."
Great stuff Alison, but i wouldn't want to repeat it.xx

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 7th Jun 2008 14:15

Hi Alison, really enjoyed this, as richard and Antonio said romantic and haunting, quite spooky really but lovely sentiments, nice one, Jeff

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Richard Brooks

Fri 6th Jun 2008 13:58

haunting but romantic images here. I love the line "I always reach for you, though i'm afraid of shadows"

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