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Two Souls

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Everyone is a  many sided personality

 

and it doesn't depend on your mentality

 

if you want to meet another soul

 

so that to be together as a whole;

 

with your characters,deeds and actions

 

come together to a certain perfection,

 

like diamonds polishing each other,

 

like diamonds sparkling together

 

reverberate in each others soul,

 

live together and play one role.

 

 

Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Tue 21st Sep 2010 09:08

Thank you my dear friends for your beautiful comments. Love you.

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Tue 21st Sep 2010 09:00

Very nice Larisa - I do rather like the comparison to diamonds my friend - I like to refer to good times shared as Diamond Days :)

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Lynn Dye

Mon 20th Sep 2010 21:28

I like this, Larisa, I think perhaps in the first line you need to say "a many sided personality". Hope you don't mind me saying this, I really like it. Best wishes, love, Lynn xx

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