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IF I AM STRONG

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Is it a compliment to be strong?

I think it's not that and it's wrong.

If I am strong

do I have to ignore my feelings?

They think I am like steel

  and will survive and cope with any drilling.

If I am strong

I'll be able to overcome all those shrill feelings.

Is it really right to be strong?

But what should I do with my feelings?

It's so painful to be strong.

Why should I suffer all those hurts and pain?

Though I will never complain

if I am strong.

And I repeat again: If I am strong

it means I don't need help

and love is not important to me? Oh, damn!

If I am strong

it looks so comfortable for others.

If I am strong

should I forgive a lie?

If I am strong

there is no place of treachery in my life

and I will never listen to falseness.

If I am strong

it's so painful. Am I right?

I wouldn't like to fight

I will just say: if you betray

get out of my way!

 

 

  Larisa R(Odessa, Ukraine)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Tue 21st Sep 2010 22:44

Yes! I agree. We have to be strong so that to survive in this world. I wouldn't like to speak about respect. To my opinion it has nothing to do with being strong. I don't really care what a gray mouse think about me, and I don't need his or her respect. I wonder what my friends think about me and those I respect. But! I am a woman and you are a man. Right? Even at my age I still don't know if I am strong or weak. There are so many different situations in life. Sometimes I win, sometimes lose.

<Deleted User> (7789)

Tue 21st Sep 2010 19:50

Hi larisa - I suppose being strong is what we have to be most of the time as people seem to respect it more - as long as it doesn't turn us into horrible people!!

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