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Harpy

 

The air of stealth and felony,

parting assets with scratches and feather tickled thievery,

pushes a knotted wind through the bigamy

of gene and ornithology

and takes

of your equity,

while you watch the birdie.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 9th Sep 2010 21:37

It makes me think of robber birds like cuckoos who are not nearly so glamourous as this. Harpy is twitching all over my mind - bird? witch? nagging woman? I need to look it up. 'Knotted wind' is fab.

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Andy N

Wed 8th Sep 2010 08:19

great use of language here again Marianne, must admit i thought it was going to carry on for a bit longer than i thought it would be (always a good idea to catch the reader out - lol)..

nice stuff again! x

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