This was my Sun Day.
In company of two fine friends.
Bus ride for a driver,
actually viewing the scenery.
Chit chat stroll and coffees.
Fine silver sand,
rock pools in rocks.
Peer, gaze and search.
Stroll along,
photograph,
and rest atop a rock mound.
It was a fine day
with fine friends.
<Deleted User> (8659)
Fri 1st Oct 2010 18:34
Certainly not rubbish Crackling, a rare gift of being able to take the reader along with you to share a moment in time.
I really like this too, it is simple yet says so much, a happy little piece.
It's charming, and sincere, and captures the mood of contentment. What else do you ask of poetry? The 'driver actually enjoying the scenery' is a great touch.
<Deleted User> (6895)
Mon 30th Aug 2010 17:20
You say its rubbish I don,t-and never would-you were then and to me now-spreading happiness-how can that be rubbish-glad you had a nice time-best regards-Stefan Wilde.
Ok, ok, its rubbish - I just needed to get some words out on what a wonderful day with two friends.
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Dave Bradley
Sun 10th Oct 2010 08:21
Only just found this and really like it. The other commenters have got it right.
Thanks for your comment on my Freedom piece which was a good laugh. Er....you weren't serious were you?