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beyond good and evil

beyond good and evil


I am the answer that lies in between the cracks of ying and yang
I am the song John Lennon sang
I am humanties only hope
for freedom without fear
what is truth
what is evil
what is good
can't you see the boundaries are blurred
can't you see beyond your own convulted words
love that doesn't acknowledge fear and hate
will only happen when we levitate
when we rise above the concepts of good and evil!

◄ BULLET

here is the revolution ►

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Daniel Hooks

Tue 27th May 2008 09:19

Thankyou all for your comments and a message to you Darren the word is like you say Convoluted and I will be editing it soon and no offence taken.

darren thomas

Mon 26th May 2008 14:08

Yes, very deep. I particularly enjoyed the first line but struggled with the word, 'convulted' is my dictionary in need of updating or should I read it as 'convoluted'. This is a genuine question and by no means a criticism! So please don't take offence Daniel.

<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 26th May 2008 02:13

Bravo!!

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 26th May 2008 01:21

Hi Daniel, deep and dark, how I like it! cheers Jeff

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