Maginot

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The walls were thick with will—

                               not strength, not steel.

 

We laid them down like pronouns in a grammar of fear,

fluent only in repetition. Stone by stone we spelled out:

Never again. And meant it.

 

But silence tunnels too.

 

A whisper breached where no guns aimed—

not headlong, but sidelong,

like memory forgetting its own edge.

 

We stood behind ideas poured in concrete,

dared the years to erode resolve.

But wars do not read manifestos.

 

They rewrite them.

 

How obstinate we were to measure threat

by angles and rivets and the reach of last century's ghosts.

As if resolve means nothing must change.

 

As if war wears the same boots twice.

 

The enemy came around not through.

And found us still posing in the mirror of our fortifications,

our certainty collapsing inward like lungs beneath mustard skies.

 

We learned nothing but how to repeat the lesson.

 

 

 

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 23rd Jun 2025 12:56

I understand where you’re coming from @Uilleam. 🌷things are quite hairy at the moment 🕊️🙏🏻

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 23rd Jun 2025 12:48

Thanks so much @Ray Miller🌷

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 23rd Jun 2025 12:46

Thanks @David RL Moore🌷human folly appears to amplify in the higher echelons of society 🕊️🙏🏻

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Ray Miller

Mon 23rd Jun 2025 09:52

Terrific poem. Well done.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 23rd Jun 2025 09:42

On reflection, RBK, I owe you an apology; your poem deserves a closer reading, I merely latched on to your last line.

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David RL Moore

Mon 23rd Jun 2025 09:08

Good morning RBK,

That is my favourite poem of yours I have read.

It is a very imaginative parallel to use The Maginot, (I always keep in mind what Einstien said about imagination) so am keen to remark upon it when I see it.

There are a couple of stand out lines for me,

"As if war wears the same boots twice"

I love that, primarily because it does and it doesn't, this creates room for thought and questioning.

"Like memory forgetting it's own edge"

The Maginot was complete folly from the French High Command, to believe it was an obstacle to fascistic expansion. They must have had to suspend rationale to make such a blinding error.

And yet we repeat, repeat, repeat...

Nice work RBK.

David RL Moore

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 23rd Jun 2025 08:26

Repeat the lies ad nauseam until they become the truth.
Meister Bibi said "jump"...so Iraq 2003
Meister Bibi said "jump"...so Iran 2025.

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