CORRA
AH! Corra,
Your approach is fearless,
your dark eyes intense,
all knowing,
you show your confidence,
even arrogance.
Receiving my gift
you bury it
with dexterity,
leaving me perplexed.
Friendship is all I ask,
you look intrested
but complete your task
before coming closer,
asking for more.
What comes next
a peanut? you ask,
you strut towards me
shuffling you feathers
in the manner of your kind,
you survey me closly
commiting my face to your mind.
You bow twice,
and rattle your throat,
a communication of sorts,
perhapse a crow warning,
a curse or a spat,
at least we are talking
I'll settle for that.
Corra is not an urban crow but a wild counrty crow - wise in the ways of guns and bird scarers. She is clever and knows that , as long as I am offering her tasty morsels, no other bird will come close so she has best pickings Her mate is a bully and steals her food as do marauding seagulls, so we have an arangment, I can see her beauty from close quarters and she has my protection.
Rolph David
Sat 8th Feb 2025 16:20
Dear Flyntland,
The way you bring her (the wild country crow) to life with such personality—fearless, confident, and cunning—is truly engaging. I love how you highlight the mutual understanding and respect between you two, framed by the subtle exchange of food and protection. The communication between you and Corra, though unconventional, feels incredibly authentic. Your portrayal of her intelligence and independence, along with the tenderness you offer in return, makes this poem both charming and evocative.
Thank you for it!
Regards,
Rolph